Week one of the book

Last week I had my first book go live. Here that it is if you want to check it out https://amzn.to/2z7dmVR. I sent out over 67 review copies from a mailing list using https://mailchimp.com/ and gave them 30 days to review the book. I also gave away 25 paperbacks here in Fresno and have gotten 10 reviews from that. I started a Amazon ad campaing after the book came out. I have 1547 impressions and 8 clicks It ends next month on the Aug 10. I have been on this podcast https://tradingjustice.com and I am trying to find more to be on but it is a process. I started my first give away here https://www.amazon.com/ga/p/838bdb198ca75716#ts-afo. I have found KDP and Createspace to have better customer support than Ingramsparks. For social media I have gotten more views to my website using twitter over facebook which is crazy I only just started using twitter those # really work. My plan for week two is to have at least 20 reviews for the book. Which should not be hard I have 10 reviewers that have finshed the book that I need to bird dog more. On July 26 I will be doing a book signing here in town with the local networking group. I am working on getting banners made for that. If you do go with ingram they have a list of where thier lightning source locatations are. Here is a link to that https://www.ingramcontent.com/about/locations. If you are close to those locations you can get away with the cheaper shipping and get it pretty quick once the printing is done. This is my first book so I am excited and will keep you updated on how week 2 has gone. Also If you have a podcast I have a nice audio setup and would love to be a guest you can PM or If you use Twitter can reach me at @jake_pelley.

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Nature does not hurry, yet everything is accomplished

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Being a Green Mother
Book Five of The Incarnations of Immortality series
By Piers Anthony
Review by Lynndee Theson
Orb has spent most of her life searching for the ultimate song known by all as the Llano.  She first heard of the Llano when she was a little girl soon after discovering her magical talent for music.  She is able to amplify her music so not only does it sound louder but it gives the impression that she isn’t playing her harp alone.  Her quest leads from her home in Ireland to Spain, France, Germany, Hungary, and India where she joins a traveling road show.
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What I like about this book
  • Orb
Orb is the daughter of Niobe(Fate), and like her mother is very beautiful.  She is talented, smart, curious, determined, brave, stubborn, short tempered, and adventurous.  I felt like Orb was the kind of person I would want to be.  She traveled the world and learned new languages, heartbreak, and a very seductive dance.
  • Jonah
Do you remember the fish from the Bible who swallowed Jonah?  That fish is now called Jonah and has been damned to swim the air and earth, but never the water.  Jonah becomes a traveling tour bus/fish for the band The Livin’ Sludge.  Jonah is so large the band travels very comfortably in the huge fish which has a kitchen, bathroom, and multiple bedrooms.  Orb convinces Jonah to be the transportation for the band with her seductive dance, but he also wants to find the Llano because it can free him of his curse.
  • Satan
Ah Satan!  (Read the book and you will get it)  As part of the big reveal in this book we are introduced to Satan in a different way than the other Incarnations have experienced.  I don’t want to give any spoilers, but Satan falls in love with Orb.
  • The Prophecy
“Each will possess the most beautiful woman of her generation, who will bear him a daughter.  One daughter will marry death and the other will marry evil.”
This book completes the last part of the prophecy from With a Tangled Skein.  The prophecy was for Niobe’s son and his cousin Pacian.  The reader gets to watch the prophecy come to pass through the books and I loved that it span multiple books without disturbing the main story of each book.
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What I don’t like about this book
  • The Llano
I didn’t like the idea that this song is the cure all for everything.  It can break curses, it can stop wars, it can free people of drug addiction, it can control the weather, it can make things grow.  I don’t think one thing can solve all the problems of the world.
  • Orbs anger
In a fit of anger, Orb as Nature destroys the world by singing the Song of Chaos.  This causes everyone she cares about on earth to die.   In order to undue what singing the Song of Chaos did, Orb has to get the consent of all the Incarnations.
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This book is really good.  I like Orb and her story.  I like how determined she is to find what she is looking for and doesn’t ever give up.  I even like Satan in this book.  I really like how this book brings all the other books together.  I think this series works so well as individual books and a series.  Do you want to read Being a Green Mother?  Buy a copy on amazon here.  I also highly recommend borrowing a copy from your local library.

Journal Entry Three: Day 7

Day 7

My mom was out of bed before everyone else this morning.  She made breakfast for us like she used to.  We even ate as a family.  Then she announced that we would be having class today.  Any other time I would have been disappointed, but not today.  If mom was going to teach class today she must be feeling better.  It would be nice to have a routine again.  My entire life had been routine, even stuff like E.D.D’s were routine for our family.  Routine meant normalcy.  This past week had been anything but normal.    

Journal Entry: Day 5

 

Day 5

Brooke won’t stop asking when we can go back home.  I don’t think her three year old mind can understand that our home may not even be there anymore. I am still trying to understand  what happened.  No one seems to know.  All the talk on the two way radio only proves that everyone is as clueless as we are.  So far we know of three other families that survived.  We knew all of them before.  They were families like ours that planned for the day something bad would happen.  Although my dad hadn’t said when we would be leaving the shelter I knew we would be here for at least a month.  No more than a year because there was only a year supply of food in the shelter.  I know because David and I had stocked a year supply of food down here a few months ago.  I miss David.  It would be so different if David were here.  As it is my mom seems to be in a world by herself where she wanders around mumbling to herself and crying.  Last night there was a noise at the door and she ran over calling out to David.  She tried to open the door.  My dad pulled her back before she could unseal it.  They fought.  The shelter is so small everyone, but Brooke who was sleeping, heard their fight. We all pretended we didn’t.  My dad told my mom David was dead.  By trying to open the door she was endangering the rest of us.  He told her she needed to accept that David was gone.  She had four other kids to think about that all needed her to be strong right now.  She hasn’t gotten out of bed today.  Day Zero

Day Zero

So, this is just an idea I am kinda playing with. It is still kinda in the experiment phase so please leave any feedback you may have in the comments. I have taken the idea of a journal from Sarah Fine who wrote a series called Guards of the Shadowlands. This is a really good series I enjoyed and will review at a later time but if you are interested you can see some of the journal entries she created here http://guardsoftheshadowlands.tumblr.com

I used the journal idea and have started a journal as a prequel to the the dystopian novel Jake and Sarah are working on.  Let me know what you think.  Any feedback would be helpful.

Lynndee Theson

Day Zero

It was early morning when the collapse happened.  The sun hadn’t come up yet.  I should have been sleeping in my bed in the room I shared with my older brother David.  Instead, my mom had barged into our room and blown the fog horn.  Everyone in our house knew what the fog horn meant.  Emergency Disaster Drill.  E.D.D.  My parents ran E.D.D’s at least twice a month and timed how long it took us to get from the house into the underground shelter they had designed and built after David was born.  David was 17 years old.  An E.D.D. could happen anytime, day or night.  It was to test how prepared we were for a disaster.  What disaster I didn’t know but my parents made sure our family would be survivors.  David was convinced our parents were crazy.  He was just waiting until his 18th birthday when he could leave.  David was still in bed when I grabbed my emergency pack and ran out the bedroom door.  My dad was waiting by the door to the underground shelter when I got there but unlike every other E.D.D. I could remember the stopwatch wasn’t anywhere to be seen.  Still, It wasn’t until after my parents came down sealed the door that I realized this wasn’t a drill.  As my dad was locking us in he called out “roll call”.  During role call everyone called out their name, starting with the oldest and ending with the youngest.  After a short pause my oldest sister Lily called out her name followed by me and then my twin sister Courtney, and lastly my baby sister Brooke.  The noise outside startled all of us but it was my mother’s anguished cries that terrified us the most.  David wasn’t here.